THREE PASS PRICING: Features - $100 Formatting, $100 Dialogue & Expo, $200 Structure

Shorts - $5 per page upfront



THREE PASS SCRIPT ANALYSIS 

First pass, correct format errors, which adversely impact scheduling and budgeting.  Matters such as consistent Scene Headings, cap correctly, V.O. vs. O.S. vs. NARRATOR,  SERIES vs MONTAGE, using Parentheticals correctly, 

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Second pass, analyze dialogue & expo (action) offering technique improvements to enhance script.  Expo techniques include: Show over Tell, avoid Editorializing, Five Senses, Symbols, Props, Body, Weather, Word Choices, Metaphors / Similes / Onomatopoeia.

Dialogue Techniques include: using  V.O. / O.S. / NARRATOR correctly, Four Major Dialogue Points, effective use of Narrator, Avoid Cliches or use with a twist, Say One Thing Mean Another, Exchange Lines, Connect Device, Third Time A Charm, Comedic Relief, 

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Third pass, the clean script is easier to analyze for story type, pov, three act structure and elements for each act, B-stories, scene construction, script integration, character development. 

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Payments over each pass makes it economical for the Client. Yanni critiqued over 1000 features using this methodology.

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FOR PRODUCERS: SCRIPT REWRITE USING PRODUCITON BOARD & BUDGET

Rewrites by a Screenwriter are mostly conducted without regard to Schedule and Budget; thus, the changes can incur a higher production cost. However, when a script needs to be rewritten to cut costs without story loss, the Screenwriter must know how to use the "Board" and the Budget to assess what affect the script changes incur. Most are not versed in this aspect. The script changes will be assessed against the Production Board to determine a reduction of scheduled days and possible reduction of a character’s days, which can save monies on paying an actor. The fewer scheduled day cost savings can be estimated by the Below-The-Line daily average expenditures derived from the Budget.  Provided the Screenwriter knows Story Structure and its elements, the rewrite should be done without story loss. Undertaking this complex rewrite provides Producers with the maximum benefit. PRICE NEGOTIABLE



TESTIMONIALS  ON YANNIS' TEACHING & CRITIQUING ABILITIES:
“Yanni’s simply the best screenwriting teacher I’ve had.  And I read all the books, been to the college film programs, the seminars.”   SM (student)

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“I thought your lectures were outstanding and motivating.  Your understanding of the material is almost intimidating.  I made it to almost every class and I live 150 miles away.”  MatM (student)


"I read your book, and used your formula...  It really works!  Tying together structure and character are tough for me.  Your book helped me so much!"  LK (student)


“Thank you for being such an inspiration to the art of screenwriting, it has changed the way I look at the whole process of film. Your class on top of all others truly inspired me to pursue a career in writing. Your passion for the craft left me wanting the same thing for myself.”  MB (student)


“Your Screenwriting Workshop was not only informative but enthusiastic, positive and fun!  I thoroughly enjoyed every minute of it and learned a great deal.  I am truly grateful for the education I received, both astounded at and appreciative of how graciously you offered your time and knowledge to us.”  CL (student)


“Congratulations on an excellent workshop series - you are awesome!”   SD (student and script analysis)


“What great guest speakers!  I especially enjoyed listening to Yanni.  He spoke with so much passion and intensity.  The film business is a very tough business.  He was very honest and open with his opinions and his personal experiences.  I could have listened to him for hours.  I wish he could come back and talk more about screenwriting.  I am so glad you had him speak to the group.  It isn't a normal occurrence to have the fortunate opportunity to listen to someone in the business speak with so much HONESTY and PASSION.  Listening to someone like Yanni speak and share in his personal stories is a rare treat and privilege.” ST (student)


“I like your approach as I think most of the rest of the class did, too. Knowledge coupled with inspiration… Keep up the great work.” JT (student)


“Thanks again for all your hard work at the classes.  I am learning a lot, and have made leaps in progress with my project.  Your classes are very insightful and motivating.  Your class can give me the basic building blocks that I've needed to produce a great screenplay and realize my dream.  Thank you very much for sharing your passion and your wisdom." CL (student)  (Student)


“I really enjoyed your workshops, and the energy you put into teaching.” LK (student)



“You can teach Yanni! One of the best and entertaining classes I took.” LP (student)


"I attended your workshop at Collins yesterday. I’m writing to thank you for taking the time to share your knowledge and wisdom about the screenwriting process and your experience as a writer in the film business. You had mentioned how important it is for you to share your knowledge with others, and I feel that is one of the greatest gifts to give. I have been in the film business a long time, and your workshop is one that I went home feeling ‘buzzed’ from the wealth of information. I enjoyed your class very much."

AL (Writer / Producer)